Hi everyone!
I am currently working on the thesis paper, I have to hand in (very) soon (unfortunately). Now I was wondering if any of you native english speakers ( or scandinavians ) would be willing to beta-read some of it?
It might even turn out to be a bit of an interesting read, because it deals with radiation sensors and computer software, etc.
Not tooooo boring, I hope.
Yeah, well. Would anyone?
Any feedback is welcome (mostly spelling- and style-wise I'd say, but of course also about the content, if you like).
But because I don't have anything to show you, yet and to start with a hopefully simple one:
What sounds better?
- That is what he observed having happened.
- That is what he observed to have happened.
Here is the real example I am wondering about, but I hope it is not necessary to look at it.
Thanks a lot in advance!! =)
I am currently working on the thesis paper, I have to hand in (very) soon (unfortunately). Now I was wondering if any of you native english speakers ( or scandinavians ) would be willing to beta-read some of it?
It might even turn out to be a bit of an interesting read, because it deals with radiation sensors and computer software, etc.
Not tooooo boring, I hope.
Yeah, well. Would anyone?
Any feedback is welcome (mostly spelling- and style-wise I'd say, but of course also about the content, if you like).
But because I don't have anything to show you, yet and to start with a hopefully simple one:
What sounds better?
- That is what he observed having happened.
- That is what he observed to have happened.
Here is the real example I am wondering about, but I hope it is not necessary to look at it.
What is better suited for a thesis / what sounds better?
- "This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of what the DUT observed to have traversed its sensitive area to particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup."
- "This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of what the DUT observed having traversed its sensitive area to particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup."
------- Or maybe the other way around? ---------
- This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup to what the DUT observed to have traversed its sensitive area.
- This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup to what the DUT observed having traversed its sensitive area.
------- Or maybe the other way around? ---------
Maybe neither of those?
- "This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of what the DUT observed to have traversed its sensitive area to particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup."
- "This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of what the DUT observed having traversed its sensitive area to particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup."
------- Or maybe the other way around? ---------
- This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup to what the DUT observed to have traversed its sensitive area.
- This assessment is performed by attempting a high-level comparison of particles actually having crossed the testbeam setup to what the DUT observed having traversed its sensitive area.
------- Or maybe the other way around? ---------
Maybe neither of those?
Thanks a lot in advance!! =)